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good but u could do much better
I know this one was an old entry.. :) thnk u blessed be
Wow ..this was fantastic ! I would say a wonderful write up ,especially from an 8th std gal . Too matured and crisp . Loved it ! :)
:) thank you good to know tat you liked it :) blessed be <3
as per being a 8th grade guy, this is much more than just good, ending ws majestic..loved ur wrk
yo kno wat... i love short stories... i ve great collection of short stories by all the great story tellers.... so i can relate wen i read short stories... I shud say.. i loved this... It jus holds one to each every sentence. Loved the ending too. 8th std???? amazin narration skills fo tat small a gal... Loved it Shruthi... keep it up \m/
@impure god..
it means a loot to get your comment :) thank you hope u r now back to blogging :) blessed be <3
wonderful story...cnt believe dt u rote it wen u were in 8th..u keep it up!!!my first ws about a boy who gets stuck inside a rainbow!!! ;)
nah dnt know didnt feel like editing :) well i guess that was my last short story too :) anyways thx for going thru blessed be <3
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